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ztina ([personal profile] ztina) wrote2011-05-25 06:28 pm

8 days Fanfic meme - Day 6

Day Six: Write a breakup scene in three sentences without giving the reason for it or using dialogue.

The pieces of the broken vase say it all but it feels like it’s the pieces of his broken heart that is scattering the floor. His heart is aching with pain, the same pain he can see reflected in Kame’s eyes. He wants to say something but nothing comes out and he is left with watching Kame walk out of his life.

Day Seven: Write two characters' second kiss in two sentences.
Day Eight: Ask flist for prompts. Write one sentence each for the first five prompts you receive.



[identity profile] wintersdancer.livejournal.com 2011-05-25 04:54 pm (UTC)(link)
asdhjksahdasjk this was beautiful ;_;

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2011-05-27 07:19 am (UTC)(link)
awww thank you so much! &hearts&hearts&hearts

This was so hard to write because, well, I don't really like writing angsty things ;_;

[identity profile] gina84.livejournal.com 2011-05-25 04:59 pm (UTC)(link)
oh my gosh.. T___T watching Kame walking away from your life and not being able to stop him must be one of the hardest and saddest moments ever >__<

shreds of broken vase as a kind of metaphor for pieces of a broken heart is a nice detail ^__^
and somehow I really like the fact we don't know who the other was lol of course I see Jin standing there all helpless

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2011-05-27 07:22 am (UTC)(link)
Aww, thank you so much &hearts&hearts&hearts

This was so incredibly hard to write ;_; I re-wrote it several times, because well, angst is not really my cup of tea, but I kind of like how this one turned out :)

And yeah, I wanted to leave it up to the reader to imagine whoever they want to be the other part in this :P

[identity profile] bellemelody.livejournal.com 2011-05-25 09:19 pm (UTC)(link)
love it!!!!!

[identity profile] fancyann1974.livejournal.com 2011-06-04 12:51 pm (UTC)(link)
so sad and touching