ztina: (akame)
ztina ([personal profile] ztina) wrote2010-10-05 08:54 am

Akame Drabble

Title: Spot On
Pairing: Akame
Genre: fluff, humour?
Rating: PG
Summary: Something in Kame’s appearance gets the attention of his younger brother and one of his older ones. (Bad summary!)
Word count: 784
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the plot.
A/N: Another drabble from me with Jin and Kame as juniors. In my head they’re like 15 and 17 or maybe a bit older. Anyway, I hope you’ll enjoy reading this since I kind of re-wrote it a few times before posting XD


”What’s that on your neck?” Yuya asked as he pushed back some hair from Kame’s neck to see it more clearly.
“What’s what?” Kame asked back as he let go of the plate he was washing and removed his hands from the kitchen zinc to touch his own neck.
“That mark. It looks like something’s bitten you” Yuya answered and Kame quickly pushed his brother away and covered his neck with his own hands.
“It’s nothing. Don’t worry” He stressed and then threw a glare in the direction of Jin who was sitting by the kitchen table chuckling. Stupid Jin hand planted a mark on him last night even though Kame had told him directly not to do so.
“But it looks really bad” Yuya said slightly confused over his brother’s antics. “Are you sure it’s nothing to worry about. Maybe we should have mum take a look at it”
“NO!” Kame shrieked and startled both Yuya and Jin but Kame really didn’t want his mother to see it. He would never be able to lie to her face and he wasn’t ready to come out just yet. He still was confused about what it was he and Jin had started, even if he was sure he liked Jin a lot and that he liked making out with him.
“I mean no.” Kame said his voice back to normal. “It’s no need to worry mum unnecessarily. I’m sure it’ll be gone soon. It’s probably a big mosquito bite”
“Really?” Yuya was a bit sceptical.
“Yes, now please drop it” Kame pleaded, his hands still securely around his neck. “Go and play with something”
“Okay” Yuya said and backed out from the kitchen but kept on looking at his older brother. Kame couldn’t blame him since he was probably acting kind of strange in his brother eyes.

“Stupid you” Kame hissed as soon as he heard Yuya making his way up the stairs and threw a sponge filled with water right at Jin, hitting him in the chest. “I told you not to!”
“But I couldn’t resist!” Jin protested as he stopped chuckling and picked the sponge up from his lap where it had ended up. He didn’t seem bothered at all by the big wet spot on his t-shirt.
“Do you want to be found out?” Kame glared at him and then gracefully managed to catch the sponge Jin threw back at him.
“It would make things easier…” Jin replied slightly hesitant.
“But I’m not ready!” Kame said dropping the sponge back in the water.
“Ready for what?” Yuichiro’s voice came from the doorway and Kame spun around quickly to face his older brother.
“How much did you hear?” He asked in slight panic.
“Just the last sentence” his brother replied and Kame let out a discreet sigh of relief.
“So what is it you’re not ready for yet?” Yuichiro repeated his question.
“Just our upcoming performance” Jin answered before Kame could say anything. “He’s saying that he for sure is going to mess up his dance steps”
“Oh, don’t worry little brother” Yuichiro said and patted Kame on the shoulder before he opened the refrigerator and picked out an apple. “I’m sure you’ll be fine.”
“Thanks” Kame replied but he it wasn’t really his brother he was thanking but rather Jin for coming up with such a good white lie.
“No probs” Yuichiro smiled making his way out of the kitchen again but he turned back around in the door way. “And little brother?”
“Yeah?” Kame asked confused over the grin his brother was now sporting.
“You should really try to cover up that love bite on your neck before mum spots it” his brother said and then quickly rushed out of Kame’s sight before he could process what had just been said.

“Jin?” Kame then said when the words had sunk in and turned to look at Jin who now looked slightly alarmed.
“Yes, Kazu-chan?” Jin gulped.
“You’re going to come with me to buy some concealer later” Kame replied with a soft smile and Jin looked at him with confusion. He had clearly awaited something else, some kind of punishment. Kame had thought about that too but he knew that he would never be able to go a day without a kiss from Jin, so a ban from that wouldn’t have worked.
“Sure” Jin shrugged.
“But you’re paying for it.” Kame then added as an afterthought. After all Jin deserved some kind of punishment for getting his older brother yet another thing to tease him about.
Jin didn’t reply to that. He just brought out his wallet and started to count his money while Kame went back to doing the dishes.


The end







[identity profile] baizz.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 04:07 pm (UTC)(link)
argh..kame is too easy on jin..
lol! hahah..

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 06:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment &hearts&hearts&hearts

I'm happy that you enjoyed reading this :)

[identity profile] absinthe1213.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 04:09 pm (UTC)(link)
that's what you get for leaving a mark~~~

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 06:12 pm (UTC)(link)
yeah that's what he gets... but it could've been much worse though.

Thanks a lot for the comment &hearts&hearts&hearts

[identity profile] chibi-turtle.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 05:14 pm (UTC)(link)
haha so innocent Yuya <3
lol Jin, did you bring enough money?
thx for sharing!

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 06:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment &hearts&hearts&hearts

It makes me really happy that you enjoyed this and that it seemingly made you laugh :)

[identity profile] wintersdancer.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 05:20 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL at both brothers XD Loved the way how Yuichiro just naturally gives his advice and then walks away LOL

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 06:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment sweetie &hearts&hearts&hearts

I'm happy that you found this one funny. I had pretty fun writing it too :)

[identity profile] wneliana.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 05:28 pm (UTC)(link)
sweet!!!
kazu, u just can't resist jin ne..
wish u all da best for next time..
and jin..
u deserved it!!
haha..
thanx for sharing..

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 06:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment &hearts&hearts&hearts

It really makes me happy to hear you enjoyed reading this :)

[identity profile] aratna.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 05:53 pm (UTC)(link)
wakakakakak... this is funny and cute...^^

yuya looks innocent... and I can imagine Yuichiro smirks..^__^
Kame's dumbfounded face.. and Jin's being Bakanishi as always...^^

thanks for sharing..^^

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 06:20 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment &hearts&hearts&hearts

I'm happy that you enjoyed reading this and that it made you laugh :D

[identity profile] evelynreeves.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 06:07 pm (UTC)(link)
hahahhaaa,,poor *wallet*jin,,*kazu just want the finest in everything,including the concealor* hahaha
kamenashi`s vrother so cute *the innocent one and the teaser one*
thx for the fluffy-ness ^0^
*hugs and hearts*

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 06:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment &hearts&hearts&hearts *hugs back*

I'm very happy that you enjoyed reading this so much and that it had you laughing :D
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[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 06:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot! &hearts&hearts&hearts

I'm feeling the looove~ flying my way :)

[identity profile] caiycaiy.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 08:45 pm (UTC)(link)
soooooo adorable♥

thanks so much for this !

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 07:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment &hearts&hearts&hearts

I'm happy that you enjoyed reading this :)

[identity profile] aishiteru-amie.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 10:22 pm (UTC)(link)
oi jin for counting his money.
how much is a concealer cost jin?
u're rich enough to buy 10 of them!
kazu is so schweet!!

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 07:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment &hearts&hearts&hearts

It makes me really happy that you enjoyed reading this :)

[identity profile] sugarbaby8-8.livejournal.com 2010-10-05 11:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Cute little thing ^^

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 07:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment &hearts&hearts&hearts

I'm glad you liked it :)

[identity profile] holly-berri.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 01:55 am (UTC)(link)
ooooh you're writing again!! *hugs* i missed your lovely akame <333

haha kame's family is so much love- lol leave it to the all knowing yuichiro to figure it out before anyone else~
and of course kame lefts jin off w/ paying ^^ *imagines akame in a convience store* XDD

thanks for sharing dear~!

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 08:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah I am writing again. YAY! :D I'm getting my motivation and inspiration back after it being gone for a couple/three weeks >_>

I'm happy that you enjoyed this and I love Kame's family as well. I always love it when he talks about them too :)

Anyway, thanks for the comment sweetie! &hearts&hearts&hearts

P.S I would answer your e-mail but my battery is low and I have no place to plug in my computer... sitting in a Coffee Bean in Beverly Hills. They have no plug ins :(

I'll answer it tomorrow or later if possible :)

Peace &hearts

[identity profile] bellemainec.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 02:38 am (UTC)(link)
awww fluffy and cute, and the concealer idea if a good thing....but I think my fave part is that Jin is willing to be open about this, but will wait until Kame is ready :)

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 10:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment &hearts&hearts&hearts

I'm happy that you enjoyed reading this :)

[identity profile] r1k1t0.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 03:02 am (UTC)(link)
Nyahahahaha!!! Scared Jin is so fun to see. xDDD
Kame scary!!! XD
Better have your cards with you, Jinjin!!
Thank you so much for sharing this!! :D

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 10:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment &hearts&hearts&hearts

I'm happy that you liked it and that it had you laughing :)

[identity profile] queen-maharani.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 03:40 am (UTC)(link)
i love this soooooooooooooo much.
thanks for sharing ^^

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 10:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment &hearts&hearts&hearts

I'm happy that you enjoyed it :)

[identity profile] lost-sky6.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 03:53 am (UTC)(link)
It's soo cute!!!
I loved it ^___^

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 10:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment &hearts&hearts&hearts

I'm happy that you enjoyed it :)

[identity profile] aishayue.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 04:48 am (UTC)(link)
kawaii... just imagining jin pulling out his wallet and counting his money. how about writing a fic with him and kame go shopping and him paying for his 'wife's things? gehehehehe!

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 10:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment &hearts&hearts&hearts

I'm happy that you liked it and I will keep that thought in mind. Maybe there will be a fic about that, who knows :)

[identity profile] watanabe-je.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 04:57 am (UTC)(link)
lolz!!!

I love Kame's older brother~~~ direct to the point... hehehe

Lucky Jin, his punishment is to accompany kame in buying the concealer and paying for it....

thanks for sharing!!!

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 10:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment &hearts&hearts&hearts

It makes me happy to hear that you enjoyed reading this :)
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[identity profile] agnes-yunita.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 05:14 am (UTC)(link)
Kame remember not just buy concealer okay...u need to punish jinjin in here and buy the expensive one...fufufufufufufu
thank u^^

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 03:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment &hearts&hearts&hearts

I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed reading this :)

[identity profile] danz8aoi.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 05:45 am (UTC)(link)
LOL.
I'm just.. speechless..
LOL
LOL
LOL

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 03:49 pm (UTC)(link)
*speechless* Thanks a lot for the comment &hearts&hearts&hearts

It really makes me kind of speechless, but of course I'm very pleased and happy to hear that you found this so funny :)

[identity profile] kazuyachan.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 07:01 am (UTC)(link)
Oh this is kawaii
arigato dear
no wonder Jin had to work do hard
his bf us high maintenace lol
hugyah;)

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 03:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment &hearts&hearts&hearts

I'm very happy that you enjoyed reading this :)

[identity profile] yhchan.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 09:19 am (UTC)(link)
..hahaha..^^ XD..good for you Jin..your fault..^^

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 03:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment &hearts&hearts&hearts

I'm happy that you enjoyed this and that it had you laughing :)

[identity profile] kyleeers.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 11:06 am (UTC)(link)
OH MY =)) this is what I need nowadays *smiles*
Thank you soo much :)

Awww, Kame-chan, give Jin-kun a rather 'harsh' punishment ne? Don't go to easy on him *winks*

Am loving Kame's older brother, so frank *laughs* Busted >_<

This made my day :) Me want more :)

*sorry I made a mistake in my earlier comment. Gomen *bows*

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 03:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment &hearts&hearts&hearts

I really am very happy that you enjoyed this so much and that I could provide you with what you needed :)

[identity profile] jennishi.livejournal.com 2010-10-06 12:23 pm (UTC)(link)
funny one! lol

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 03:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment &hearts&hearts&hearts

I'm happy that you found this funny :)

[identity profile] abi-manyu.livejournal.com 2010-10-08 06:11 am (UTC)(link)
LOL...
really...
can't hold my laugh.. :)

just concealer?? jin should pay more, ne.. ^^
thank you, dear...
it's lovely...

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-10-11 03:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment &hearts&hearts&hearts

It makes me really happy to hear that you enjoyed reading this so much and that you couldn't hold your laugh :)

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