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ztina ([personal profile] ztina) wrote2010-05-12 02:12 pm

Akame, intended drabble, ended up as a one shot...

Title: Water
Pairing: Akame

Genre: PWP, fluff?
Rating: NC: 17
Word count: 1762
Summary: Jin, Kame at a hot spring. Yamapi, Ryo, Toma and Shirota are there at the beginning.
Disclaimer: I own nothing but the plot.
A/N: First off, I have not re-read this so it might be words lost here or there, grammar mistakes or misspellings. Secondly I wrote this because [livejournal.com profile] kittycat666 wanted to read one of the slightly “inappropriate” times Jin got an erection that was mentioned in my previous dictionary drabble/one shot Erection. So I got a word that would suit; water and so here it is. This was meant to be a drabble but got way to long to be counted as one. Also, I hope this turned out as hot as I wanted it to XD
ENJOY! (^____^)V


He sighed with contentment as he sank further down into the water and let the warmth overtake and relax both his body and mind. He closed his eyes and the sound of Jin, who was sitting just inches away from him, chattering with Yamapi, Ryo, Toma and Shirota turned into a mere mumbling noise. He was happy that he had been pursued by Jin to come with him and his friends to the hot springs. He was even happier that they all were considerate enough to not force him into joining in on the conversation and just let him go into his own world of relaxation. He sighed again and let his mind drift away into another world.

Kame had no idea for how long they had been in the water when he suddenly felt Jin’s hand take hold of his underneath the water. He didn’t open his eyes and just let Jin lead his hand away slowly. Kame could still hear the other’s talking cheerfully and Jin was participating as well he noticed. He enjoyed feeling Jin’s hand against his skin and was just about to drift off again when he opened his eyes in utter surprise and turned to look over at Jin. He had lead his hand towards his crouch and was now wrapping Kame’s fingers around his hardening length not once glancing at Kame but instead keeping up his conversation with his friends. Kame couldn’t believe this but he didn’t pull away his hand from Jin. If he’d done that he would cause a scene and he really didn’t want to bring any attention to him. All he wanted was to relax.

Jin started to move their hands together up and down his erection in a slow pace. Kame threw a cautious look at the others but no one seemed to have noticed what Jin was doing. He closed his eyes again and soon Jin let go of his hand and Kame’s hand continued to move on its own. Kame could feel Jin growing bigger and harder against his palm and somehow that made him feel contented and as he continued to stroke Jin he fell back into his daydreams. This time though his dreams was of a much more sexual nature.

Some time went by and Kame continued to stroke Jin under the water in a steady pace while he was slowly getting aroused himself. He didn’t pay his own arousal much attention though and probably would have left it that way hadn’t been for Jin’s fingers tripping over his thigh to then wrapping themselves around his erection. Kame jolted at the touch and ended up releasing his hold of Jin and sliding down underneath the water with a small splash. When he got back up everyone was staring at him as he coughed and tried to compose himself again.
“Are you alright Kame?” Yamapi asked sounding a bit concerned.
“Yeah, I’m fine” Kame replied and gave them all a reassuring smile before he glared at Jin. His boyfriend had a big grin on his face.
“Ah, I think I’m gonna go and get a massage before we head out for dinner” Toma said grabbing a hold of his towel behind him.
“Great idea” Shirota agreed making his way out of the water. Ryo and Yamapi agreed as well and followed them up from the water. Kame couldn’t help but check them out a little, even though their bodies would never look as great as Jin’s. Kame knew however that if he had never met Jin, that If he had never fallen in love with Jin, that he if he didn’t love Jin as much as he did and that if any of those four guys was even a tiny bit gay or bi that he would have tried to hook up with one or all of them.
“Are you guys coming as well?” Yamapi asked when he had wrapped his towel firmly around his waist.
“No, we’re going to stay a while longer” Jin replied with a grin. Kame didn’t disagree because there was no way that he would get out of the water when the others would obviously notice that he was aroused. He didn’t feel up to get embarrassed like that.
“Suit yourself.” Ryo smirked. “Have fun. Meet us by the reception in an hour, ok?”
Jin and Kame just nodded as the others bid them goodbye for now before they left.

As soon as they were left alone Jin pulled Kame by the arm so that he ended up in Jin’s lap. Kame quickly adjusted himself so that he was sitting with one leg on each side of Jin’s body before his lips were captured by Jin in a heated kiss. The kiss was hungry, sloppy with lots of tongue and saliva. Kame moaned loudly into the kiss and wrapped his arms securely around Jin’s neck. Jin’s hands in turn started to wander down Kame’s body and then with one swift movement he pushed a finger inside him. Kame jolted at the sudden intrusion but thanks to the water it didn’t feel as rough as it would usually have done when they had no lubricant at hand. Jin broke the kiss and looked at Kame a bit concerned but started to move his finger in and out slowly.

“You okay?” Jin asked before he attacked Kame’s neck, sucking, nibbling and kissing the moist skin there.
“Ye-eah” Kame replied arching his back slightly so that his chest came in closer contact with Jin’s and lifted his lower body up from Jin’s lap slightly. That gave Jin both better accesses to his ass as well as his neck.
“Just got a bit surprised”
Jin hummed in response against Kame’s skin making the other shiver. Kame’s hand found their ways into Jin’s wet locks and he started to caress it in rough yet gentle way in an attempt to keep some kind of control over the situation. Jin pushed another finger inside and with that dragged a moan out of him, a long loud moan. His hold of Jin’s hair got tighter for a moment but as soon as he got used to it, his hold got softer. Jin moved his mouth up Kame’s neck, jaw and then finally captured Kame’s lips again. Kame let Jin’s tongue inside and started to suck it making the other moan.

Kame moved his body upwards a little as Jin pulled out his fingers and half of his ass ended up above the water surface. He shivered slightly as the air hit his wet body but didn’t get much time to think about that as Jin gripped a hold of his hips. Kame took a firm hold of Jin’s shoulders as the other guided his entrance towards his erection. He felt the head poking against him and he took a deep breath as Jin slowly started to push him downwards to completely engulf the other inside of him. Jin let out a groan once he was fully inside and then they stayed still for a moment. Kame let himself fall forward his grip at Jin’s shoulder getting a little bit tighter as he got adjusted to the other. He closed his eyes to focus his attention but opened them when Jin gave him a soft kiss.

“You okay?” Jin asked a soft smile on his face. Kame smiled back and nodded before he closed his eyes again and leaned in to kiss Jin. The kiss started out gentle but quickly grew heated and Kame’s arms slipped around Jin’s neck instead to hold him closer. Soon Jin carefully started to lift Kame by the hips to start their movement. Kame moaned into the kiss and started to move with Jin, trying his best to help Jin find a good rhythm and find that spot inside of him that would make his mind go blank with pleasure. After a few thrust they found the spot and Kame had to throw his head back to let out a loud cry in pleasure. Jin kept them moving making sure not to lose the angle and hit Kame at the same spot every time. Kame’s mind was in a total blur and he couldn’t think at all just letting his whole body get taken over by the sensation.

Jin pressed Kame closer to his body, trapping the other’s erection between them. The friction it gave Kame with every move of their bodies was enough to make him be pushed over the edge after just a few more thrusts by Jin. He arched his back chanting Jin’s name as he came hard. Lost in the sensation of his own orgasm he could barely make out how Jin called his name on repeat while seeking his own release. With a hoarse, load grown Jin released himself inside of Kame who let out a small cry in response.

Jin wrapped his arms firmly around Kame’s body, planting a soft kiss at the side of Kame’s head. Kame sighed in return as he felt Jin moving them further into the hot water, him now ending up lying instead of sitting on Jin. He felt so relaxed and contented, more so than in a very long time.
“Ah, that was great” Jin said and Kame could tell he was grinning.
“Yeah, but how in the world did you manage to keep your poker face for so long?” Kame asked nuzzling his head into the nap of Jin’s neck as he remembered how it had actually all started.
“I didn’t” Jin replied. “I’m pretty sure they knew what was going on. You were just so gone into your own world to notice the moans that escaped me”
“Oh” was Kame’s only reply before he closed his eyes.
“Don’t fall asleep” Jin nudged him in the ribs making him squirm a little. “We have to get up. We’re having dinners with the others”
“Do we have to?” Kame complained not caring at all that he sounded like a brat.
“Yes” Jin poked him on the nose before he adjusted his arms around Kame so that he could lift him up from the water. “You can sleep when we get back home”
Kame just sighed as he was let down on the floor and then was handed his towel. Jin smiled at him as he wrapped his own towel around his waist.
“Let’s go” Jin grabbed a hold of Kame’s hand and pulled him with him. Kame sighed again and looked with a longing look at the hot spring they were leaving behind.

The end


[identity profile] akameangel.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 12:39 pm (UTC)(link)
This is really hot and cute..
I was giggling while reading kame thoughts about Pi, Ryo and Yuu
Quite greedy ne, bakame.
:P
Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed reading it.

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 12:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment <333

I'm happy that you found this hot and cute and enjoyable and that it even made you giggle (^_____^)

[identity profile] tehee-kira.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 12:44 pm (UTC)(link)
why isjin always say “You okay?”?
he is definitely love kame >.<

thank you for this ^^

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 12:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment <333

and to answer your question, you are right Jin is most definitely in love with Kame and so of course he wants to make sure his love is okay. He is a man who uses few words to show he cares ^^

[identity profile] chjc-mishiko.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 01:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww I've always loved smutty fluff genre :DDD
I didn't know whether to be jealous or to feel sorry for the four guys, lol. They got to see real Akame actions in the onsen! XD
But really Jin, just because they're your friends doesn't mean you can get it on with Kame like that! And Kame must have really been too gone to not realise that the guys did notice XDDD

&hearts&hearts&hearts

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 01:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment <333

I'm really happy that you enjoyed reading this fluffy smut (^____^)

And yeah, Kame was pretty gone, but judging by how hard he works he has probably learned by now just how to shut down competently when he needs to relax XP

[identity profile] aishayue.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 01:08 pm (UTC)(link)
hahaha! I wonder what the others were thinking!!!

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 01:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment <333

What the others though is a mystery but one can always speculate about it. They probably knew what would happen though XP

[identity profile] deeacrazyme.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 01:10 pm (UTC)(link)
now that is hot and kinky
in a onsen...how much better can it get?
i don't think kame would ever do that in reality...but if he does....god..please make him do that some more
i didn't like him checking the other guys...but as long as he only dates and loves jin..i'm cool with it
thanks for sharing!

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 01:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment <333

I'm happy that you enjoyed this and found it hot (^____^)

And yeah Kame would probably never do this but one is always free to fantasies about anything, right? XP

Of course Kame will only stay with and love Jin, he would never dream of leaving him I am sure ^^

[identity profile] pikachancalok.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 01:14 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL XDDD
jin can be horny even when his friends are around~

this is amazing^^
thank u for sharing~

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 01:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment <333

I'm happy that you enjoyed this, that it made you laugh and that you found this amazing (^____^)

<3

[identity profile] gracejjang9.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 01:16 pm (UTC)(link)
this is really cute X3 yet hot
sankyu ~ i had much fun reading this ^^ ur good keep the good work

Re: <3

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 01:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment <333

I'm happy to hear that you found this cute and hot, and that you had fun reading it (^____^)

[identity profile] dorayaki-chan.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 01:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Giggling Blushing and NOsEbleeding b(^//^)b and give you ^3^ ^3^ ^3^ ^3^ ^3^ chuuu attack

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 01:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment <333

I'm happy that this brought those reactions out from you. A very good combination but I do hope that your nose don't bleed too much XD

[identity profile] kittycat666.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 01:44 pm (UTC)(link)
yay, you granted my wish *O*
I was pretty stoked, when I read my name in your note above x'DD
And though I've got lots of work to do, I ended up reading it eventually <3

I loved it 8D
Onsen smex is the best :DD
I wonder what the others were thinking.... probably
"I need to get outta here, before I get hard myself! O.O''' "
Or something among that line xDD~

*leaves 2 cookies*

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 01:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much for the comment <333 *munches on the cookies*

I'm happy that you enjoyed reading this so much, since I wrote this out of your wish. This is a good proof that wishes can come true, ne? (^_____^)

The others probably had mixed feelings about this, both wanting and not wanting to stay XP

[identity profile] mailinh6589.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 01:46 pm (UTC)(link)
they should do this more often <3
Not a single "I love u" word but I feel so much love in here
and thanks to Pi, Toma and Shirota <3
seem like Jin can get arousal whenever Kame is around =))

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 01:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment <333

It makes me happy that you liked this, and that you felt the love even without them saying it out loud. That just shows that sometimes words are not necessary (^____^)

[identity profile] urameshiyaaan.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 01:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Nice one!! Thinking they started in front of all the others... so funny. I was giggling while reading.
Thanks for sharing (^^)

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 02:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment <333

I'm happy to hear that you liked this, that you found it funny and it made you giggle (^____^)

[identity profile] chibitanz.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 01:53 pm (UTC)(link)
KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA~
cute jin!
<3 i like it. thanks for sharing! ^^

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 02:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment <333

I'm happy to hear that you liked this (^____^)

[identity profile] starg8fan-liz.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 02:18 pm (UTC)(link)
nice one XD so funny to think of the others when Jin couldn't keep his poker face XD LOL

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-05-13 02:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment <333

I'm happy that you enjoyed this and that you thought it was funny (^____^)

[identity profile] yamasho.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 02:32 pm (UTC)(link)
it going to be shocked for who gonna use the hot spring later

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-05-13 02:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks for the comment <333

Let's hope they didn't leave to much clues about what happened in there XP

[identity profile] sugar-pain-baby.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 02:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you for fixing my amazingly crappy day with your wonderful fluffy Akame smut~~!!! ♥ ♥ ♥

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-05-13 02:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment <333

It makes me very happy that I could fix your day with this and that you thought of this as wonderful (^____^)

[identity profile] diisa-pinky.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 02:39 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL~~!!! horny jin xDDDD
sweet and HOT! and bakanishi :P
thanks for sharing~~ <3

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-05-13 02:38 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment <333

It makes me happy that you found this hot, cute and funny (^____^)

[identity profile] r1k1t0.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 02:54 pm (UTC)(link)
ROFL!!! They knew!! What good friends~! XDDDD
This is hot~ :D
And Jin... Just can't keep his hands to himself, huh? XDD

Thanks for sharing! :D

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-05-13 02:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment <333

I'm happy that you found this so funny, and hot (^____^)

Of course Jin can't keep to himself, who would if one had a boyfriend like Kame XP

[identity profile] hibinoasami.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 03:04 pm (UTC)(link)
ohhhh Stina-san ~~ its been so long since i've read ur fic XD
blame my exam -_-

anyway, am melted !! XD

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-05-13 02:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment sweetie! <333

Don't worry, we all have our busy times I'm just happy that you got some time to read this, liked it and that you commented (^____^)

[identity profile] kazumishizue.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 03:17 pm (UTC)(link)
what the hot session..
i can't stop smiling reading this...
:D

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-05-13 02:43 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment <333

I'm happy that this had you smiling, and of course that you thought this was hot (^____^)

[identity profile] mayam-mj90.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 03:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwww... Cute Kame is cute!!! And Jin looking after brat Kame is sweet!! And Kame checking out the others is funny. :)

Very hot. :D

Thanx for sharing!!!!

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-05-13 02:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment <333

It makes me really happy that you enjoyed this and thought it was hot (^____^)

[identity profile] sumomo-yuki.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 04:23 pm (UTC)(link)
Whiney Kame is cute!!! XDDD

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-05-13 02:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment <333

Yeah a whiny Kame is cute, and he can get away with being whiny at times because of how hard he works XP

[identity profile] yunizhamasaki.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 04:33 pm (UTC)(link)
kame,where are you?
they already notice it long time ago but
i'm jealous with Pi, Ryo and Yuu
i want to be there
hehe
thanks for the fic

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-05-13 02:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment <333

I'm happy that you enjoyed this (^____^) and I think any Akame fan would want to witness something like that XP

[identity profile] garnet-light.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 07:48 pm (UTC)(link)
OMG! I knew the others would notice something
There is no way someone can handle such treatment without moaning or showing something on his face ne~~
That was hot! Hot springs are definitely awesome!
The water setting and the whole atmosphere was great!
Thanks a lot for writing and sharing this!! *hugs u*

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-05-13 02:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment <333 *hugs you back*

Your comment makes me really happy. It makes me all smiley that you thought this was hot and that you enjoyed the atmosphere in it (^____^)

[identity profile] caiycaiy.livejournal.com 2010-05-12 10:15 pm (UTC)(link)
i love how this starts and ends with Kame and the mention of the hot spring XD

thanks for this~

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-05-13 07:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment <333

I'm happy that you enjoyed reading this (^___^)

[identity profile] absinthe1213.livejournal.com 2010-05-13 01:03 am (UTC)(link)
i mean, that is one place to do it...
hahaha

[identity profile] swedish-weirdo.livejournal.com 2010-05-13 07:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks a lot for the comment <333

yeah, that sure is a place to do it XD

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